Grade 3 Fall โ€” Personal Narrative, Complex Sentences with Subordinate Clauses, and Morphology with Affixes and Roots
English ยท WR G3 eng.g3.f.wr.peer_editing_6_move_protocol

Run a peer-editing conversation using the 6-move protocol

Conduct a structured peer-edit conversation: (1) listen all the way through, (2) compliment with a quote, (3) ask one question, (4) suggest one named revision move, (5) writer responds with their thinking aloud, (6) writer decides what to change. The new move 5 (writer responds) makes the writer's metacognition visible.

Mastery threshold
85%
Min instances
6
Typical minutes
35
Spaced intervals (days)
1, 3, 7, 14, 30, 60
Successors
  • eng.g4.f.wr.peer_revision_protocols_extended
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Common misconceptions
  • Peer editor skips move 5 (writer-responds) and lets the writer go straight to a decision.
  • Writer treats move 5 as 'defend yourself' instead of 'think out loud about whether this fits my piece.'

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