Grade 3 Fall — Personal Narrative, Complex Sentences with Subordinate Clauses, and Morphology with Affixes and Roots
English · WR
G3
eng.g3.f.wr.revision_named_moves_g3
Apply 6 named revision moves: add sensory, stronger verb, combine with subordinator, vary length, show don't tell, check tense
Use a 6-move named revision menu during workshop: (1) ADD SENSORY DETAIL — add a sight, sound, smell, touch, or taste; (2) STRONGER VERB — replace 'said/went/got' with a Tier-2 Set 7 verb; (3) COMBINE WITH A SUBORDINATING CONJUNCTION — join two short sentences with when/because/although/since/after/before/while/until/if; (4) VARY SENTENCE LENGTH; (5) SHOW DON'T TELL — replace 'I was scared' with an action/sensation/dialogue line; (6) CHECK TENSE.
Mastery threshold
90%
Min instances
10
Typical minutes
35
Spaced intervals (days)
1, 3, 7, 14, 30, 60
Successors
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eng.g4.f.wr.revision_protocols_extended
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Common misconceptions
- Confuses ADD SENSORY with ADD ANY DETAIL (sensory must be one of the 5 senses).
- Uses STRONGER VERB to replace every verb, including ones that already fit.