Apply 6 named revision moves: add sensory, stronger verb, combine with subordinator, vary length, show don't tell, check tense
Exercise Difficulty 3 ~4 min eng.g3.f.ex_30

Revision Move Self Explain

Prompt

Pick the move from your revision day that helped your draft MOST. Write a 2-sentence explanation: WHICH move did you apply, and WHY did it improve the draft?

How it's presented
mode handwriting paper single line g3
Answer criteria
type rubric
criteria
  1. Move named correctly from the 6
  2. Explanation connects move to a specific improvement
Hints
  1. The 'why' is the metacognitive part — name what changed for the reader.
  2. Avoid 'it sounded better' — be specific.
Misconceptions to watch
  • Names a move without explaining the improvement.
  • Says 'it sounded better' without specifying what changed.
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