Run a peer-editing conversation using the 6-move protocol
Exercise Difficulty 4 ~15 min eng.g3.f.ex_39

Peer Edit Conversation

MG-13 Chart
Peer-edit 6-move protocol bookmark (print-ready 2x7 inches): 1. LISTEN all the way through. 2. COMPLIMENT WITH A QUOTE.

Peer-edit 6-move protocol bookmark (print-ready 2x7 inches): 1. LISTEN all the way through. 2. COMPLIMENT WITH A QUOTE. 3. ASK ONE QUESTION. 4. SUGGEST ONE NAMED REVISION MOVE (ADD SENSORY / STRONGER VERB / VARY LENGTH / COMBINE WITH SUBORDINATING CONJUNCTION / SHOW DON'T TELL / CHECK TENSE). 5. WRITER RESPONDS WITH THEIR THINKING. 6. WRITER DECIDES. Front color, back dyslexic-friendly B&W.

Prompt

Pair up with a partner. Run the 6-move peer-edit protocol on each other's first-narrative drafts. Use MG-13 bookmark. Record your partner's compliment-with-quote, question, and named suggestion. Then make your WRITER RESPONSE out loud. Decide.

M-3-F-EX-39 Chart
Reference image of the MG-13 bookmark in use with a pencil pointing to move 5. Print-ready 2x7.

Reference image of the MG-13 bookmark in use with a pencil pointing to move 5. Print-ready 2x7.

How it's presented
mode oral with written capture
Answer criteria
type rubric
criteria
  1. All 6 moves visible (or audio-recorded)
  2. Compliment includes a real quote
  3. Question is genuine
  4. Suggestion uses a named revision move
  5. Writer's response is metacognitive (out loud)
  6. Writer's decision is clear
Hints
  1. Use the bookmark — don't skip moves.
  2. Move 5 (writer responds) is the new G3 move. Think OUT LOUD.
Misconceptions to watch
  • Peer editor jumps to move 4 without 1-3.
  • Writer treats move 5 as 'defend yourself' instead of 'think out loud'.
Used in lessons