Grade 6 Spring — Rhetorical Devices, Sentence Craft, and Formal Multi-Pass Peer Revision Protocols
Lesson 14 60 min eng.g6.s.lesson_14.analogy_completion_drafting_workshop

Analogy completion (a:b::c:d) + original argument drafting workshop

Objectives
  • Students complete analogies in a:b::c:d format using 4 relation types (synonym/antonym, part/whole, cause/effect, item/category).
  • Students construct an analogy for their own argument as a clarifying move.
  • Students continue drafting original argument with device-pass eye.
Vocabulary
analogya:b::c:dsynonymantonympart-wholecause-effectitem-categoryrelation

Lesson plan

Warm-up

5 min

Quick-write: 'Big is to large as small is to ___.' Solve. Now identify the RELATION between big and large.

Teacher moves
  • Listen for student grasp of relation-naming
  • Lead toward: 'big and large are SYNONYMS; small and tiny are also synonyms'
  • Affirm: naming the relation IS the answer

Direct instruction

12 min

An ANALOGY in a:b::c:d format reveals ONE of FOUR relation types. Look at MG-14. RELATION 1 SYNONYM/ANTONYM (big:large::small:tiny = synonym; hot:cold::up:down = antonym). RELATION 2 PART/WHOLE (finger:hand::petal:flower; page:book::brick:wall). RELATION 3 CAUSE/EFFECT (rain:flood::study:knowledge; fire:smoke::practice:skill). RELATION 4 ITEM/CATEGORY (rose:flower::oak:tree; tuna:fish::sparrow:bird). To solve an analogy: STEP 1 NAME the relation between a and b. STEP 2 APPLY the same relation between c and d. STEP 3 CHECK reversibility (does b:a::d:c also work?). Why does this matter for ARGUMENT? Because analogies are CLARIFYING MOVES — when you can't explain a complex claim directly, an analogy makes it accessible. Example: 'A school without art is to education as a meal without spices is to nourishment.' (Item/category — accessible without further explanation.)

Key examples
  • Naming the relation IS the answer. Once you have the relation, the missing word follows.
    model petal:FLOWER. Relation: PART/WHOLE (a finger is part of a hand; a petal is part of a flower).
    prompt Solve: 'finger:hand::petal:___.' Name the relation.
  • Analogies in argument do the explanatory work that direct claims sometimes cannot.
    model Sample for school-uniforms: 'A uniform is to identity as a frame is to a painting.' (Part/whole or item/category — could be either, depending on how you read it.) The analogy CLARIFIES that uniforms don't replace identity; they frame it.
    prompt Construct an analogy for your fall/spring argument topic.
  • Cause/effect relation. Sequence matters: a leads to b, c leads to d.
    model study:KNOWLEDGE. Relation: CAUSE/EFFECT (rain causes flood; study causes knowledge).
    prompt Solve: 'rain:flood::study:___.'
Checks for understanding
  • Cold Call: name the relation in 'rose:flower::oak:tree.'
  • Pair-share: construct one analogy for fall topic; name the relation
  • Thumbs: I can complete an analogy and name the relation (up) / I need more practice (down)

Guided practice

25 min
Tasks
  • Complete 10 analogies on the worksheet. For each: write the missing word + name the relation type.
    scaffold MG-14 anchor at desk; worksheet with 10 analogies (5 levels of difficulty)
  • Construct an analogy that CLARIFIES your argument's central claim. Use it in your intro paragraph.
    scaffold Analogy-construction card with relation-type checklist
  • Drafting workshop: continue original argument with device-pass eye. Apply at least 1 device in body paragraph 2 today.
    scaffold MG-2 + MG-30 at desk; device-pass plan from yesterday
Media
M-6-S-VOC-14-A Manipulative Physical / non-image

20-card deck. Each card has an analogy with one slot blank (a:b::c:___) and 4 multiple-choice options. Distributed across 4 relation types (5 cards each: synonym/antonym, part/whole, cause/effect, item/category). Self-check key on reverse with relation type named. Print-ready card stock.

M-6-S-VOC-14-B Interactive Physical / non-image

Worksheet with 5 templates (one per relation type + free). Student constructs 1 analogy that clarifies their argument's central claim. Reverse has 3 mentor-text analogy examples (e.g., Lincoln's 'four score and seven years' as historical-arithmetic analogy). Print-ready 8.5x11.

Formative assessment

4 min
Exit ticket
  • Submit the analogy you constructed for your argument + your body paragraph 2 draft with 1 device applied.
scoring Analogy named relation + body has device = mastery; 1 of 2 = practicing; neither = conferring tomorrow

Closure

2 min
Moves
  • Restate: analogy = relation-naming + parallel completion; analogies CLARIFY arguments
  • Preview tomorrow's sentence rhythm + drafting

Homework

25 min
Tasks
  • Continue argument draft — finish body 2 + draft body 3 (or counterclaim) with device applied. Bring tomorrow.

Exercises in this lesson

eng.g6.s.ex_26
Complete 10 analogies in a:b::c:d format. Name the relation type (synonym/antonym, part/whole, cause/effect, item/category) for each.
complete ten analogies · diff 3
eng.g6.s.ex_27
Construct an analogy that CLARIFIES your argument's central claim. Use it in your intro paragraph. Name the relation type.
construct argument analogy · diff 4

Differentiation

Scaffolds
  • MG-14 anchor at every desk
  • Pre-filled relation for 2 analogies
  • Analogy-construction card with sample relation-types
Extensions
  • Construct an analogy chain (a:b::c:d::e:f::g:h)
  • Find an analogy in a mentor speech (King, Adichie); analyze its rhetorical function
English Learners
  • Bilingual MG-14
  • Reduced-target: 6 analogies instead of 10
  • Pre-filled analogy template for argument
Ieps 504s
  • Reduce to 6 analogies
  • MG-14 anchor at desk
  • Allow oral analogy completion

Teacher notes

Analogy completion is a vocabulary-and-reasoning move. The 4-relation taxonomy is essential — students who can NAME the relation can complete any analogy. Watch for students who 'feel' the answer without naming the relation — push for the explicit naming step. The argument-application move (analogy as clarifying move) is the writing connection. Drafting workshop continues today; balance vocabulary instruction with drafting time.