Grade 6 Spring — Rhetorical Devices, Sentence Craft, and Formal Multi-Pass Peer Revision Protocols
Lesson 1 60 min eng.g6.s.lesson_01.rhetoric_launch_ethos_pathos_logos_applied

Launching rhetoric — ethos/pathos/logos applied to mentor speeches (Yousafzai Nobel, Sotomayor Princeton)

Objectives
  • Students re-engage ethos/pathos/logos from G6-fall and APPLY the framework to two new mentor speeches.
  • Students identify which mode dominates each mentor speech and explain why for the audience.
  • Students preview the term's rhetorical-devices arc and the literary-analysis-of-rhetoric essay.
Vocabulary
rhetoricdeviceethospathoslogosregisteraudiencepersona

Lesson plan

Warm-up

7 min

Quick-write: 'Why did your fall argument include the kinds of evidence you chose? Was it more about credibility (ethos), feeling (pathos), or reasoning (logos)?'

Teacher moves
  • Circulate to read 3-4 quick-writes
  • Press for SPECIFICITY about WHICH evidence served which mode
  • Acknowledge that most arguments use all three but one tends to lead
Media
M-6-S-RH-01-B Illustration
Classical triangle diagram with three labeled vertices: ETHOS (blue, with credibility/authority icon — gavel or laurel w

Classical triangle diagram with three labeled vertices: ETHOS (blue, with credibility/authority icon — gavel or laurel wreath), PATHOS (red, with heart icon), LOGOS (green, with brain/scales icon). Center: AUDIENCE word with arrow showing 'audience determines balance.' Style: clean diagrammatic, dyslexic-friendly font. Print-ready 11x17 for display.

Direct instruction

18 min

Welcome to G6 spring — the term you become a RHETORICIAN. We met ethos/pathos/logos in fall as a NAMING tool. This term we DEPLOY them. Aristotle gave us not only the three modes but a toolkit of NAMED DEVICES — patterns of language used deliberately for argumentative effect. Today we re-meet ethos/pathos/logos in two mentor speeches you haven't analyzed yet. Yousafzai's Nobel lecture (2014) is heavy on ETHOS (her authority as a survivor) and PATHOS (her direct address to children worldwide). Sotomayor's Princeton commencement (2014) is heavy on ETHOS (her judicial credibility) and LOGOS (her structured account of how affirmative action shaped her). Notice the AUDIENCE — Nobel committee + global audience vs. graduating Princeton class — and how each mode serves that audience.

Key examples
  • Yousafzai leads with ethos because her audience must first accept her authority — only then will her pathos and logos land.
    model Highlight ETHOS in blue (her authority as a survivor); PATHOS in red (her direct address to children); LOGOS in green (her statistics on out-of-school girls). Which mode dominates this paragraph?
    prompt Read paragraph 4 of Yousafzai's Nobel lecture.
  • Sotomayor leads with logos because her audience (Ivy graduates) values reasoned argument over emotional appeal.
    model Highlight ETHOS (her judicial standing); LOGOS (her structured argument); PATHOS (her gratitude). Which dominates?
    prompt Read paragraph 2 of Sotomayor's Princeton speech.
Checks for understanding
  • Pair-share: how does Yousafzai's audience differ from Sotomayor's audience, and how does that shape the mode balance?
  • Cold Call (Lemov): name one passage where ethos is dominant and explain why.
  • Thumbs: I can name the dominant mode in each excerpt (up) / I need re-explanation (down)
Media
M-6-S-RH-01-A Video Physical / non-image

Archival video from Nobel ceremony 10 December 2014, paragraphs 4-5 of her lecture. Caption track on. Pause-and-discuss prompts at 0:30 (ethos), 1:00 (pathos), 1:30 (logos). Annotation worksheet provided. Volume calibrated for classroom playback. Print transcript with line numbers for close-reading.

Guided practice

15 min
Tasks
  • Annotate paragraph 5 of Yousafzai's lecture using the 3-color highlight key. Label dominant mode in margin.
    scaffold Partial-fill annotation with ethos already highlighted; student adds pathos + logos
  • Compare: which speech relies more on logos? Why might the audience drive that choice? Discuss with elbow partner.
    scaffold MG-17 SOAP framework card on desk to identify audience
Media
M-6-S-RH-01-C Chart
MG-17 SOAP framework anchor printed at 8.5x11 per student. Four boxed fields (Speaker / Occasion / Audience / Purpose) w

MG-17 SOAP framework anchor printed at 8.5x11 per student. Four boxed fields (Speaker / Occasion / Audience / Purpose) with prompts for each. Reverse has worked example for King's I Have a Dream.

MG-17 Chart
SOAP framework anchor (for rhetorical analysis): 4-field card. SPEAKER (S) — Who is speaking? What is their credibility/

SOAP framework anchor (for rhetorical analysis): 4-field card. SPEAKER (S) — Who is speaking? What is their credibility/persona/role? OCCASION (O) — When and where is the speech given? What was happening at the time? AUDIENCE (A) — Who is listening? What do they know, value, fear? PURPOSE (P) — What is the speaker trying to achieve? Inform / persuade / commemorate / inspire / mobilize? Worked example for King 'I Have a Dream': S = MLK, civil rights leader, Baptist minister, age 34; O = 28 August 1963 March on Washington at Lincoln Memorial; A = 250,000 marchers, national TV audience, US government; P = to mobilize support for civil rights legislation and to articulate the moral case for racial equality. Bottom: 'SOAP analysis precedes device analysis. Devices serve purpose for audience.' Print-ready 11x17.

Formative assessment

5 min
Exit ticket
  • For your fall argument topic: if your audience were CHANGED (e.g., from peers to school board), which mode would you lead with and why?
scoring Names new audience + new dominant mode + reasoning = mastery; 2 of 3 = practicing; 1 = reteach

Closure

3 min
Moves
  • Restate: ethos = credibility, pathos = emotion, logos = reason; audience drives the balance
  • Preview tomorrow's L.6.1.e Standard-English variations work and L.6.1 pronoun review

Homework

15 min
Tasks
  • Read your independent-reading nonfiction. Find one paragraph where ethos, pathos, OR logos dominates. Bring the source tomorrow with your annotation.

Exercises in this lesson

eng.g6.s.ex_01
Read paragraph 6 of Yousafzai's Nobel lecture. Highlight ETHOS in blue, PATHOS in red, LOGOS in green. Label which mode dominates and...
annotate mode dominance · diff 2
eng.g6.s.ex_02
For your fall argument topic: list 3 possible audiences (peer / school board / online forum). For each, name which mode...
audience mode match · diff 3

Differentiation

Scaffolds
  • 3-color highlight key card at every desk
  • MG-17 SOAP card at every desk
  • Partial-fill annotation for both excerpts
  • Sentence frame: 'This passage uses ___ (ethos/pathos/logos) because the writer ___.'
Extensions
  • Find a third mentor speech in independent reading; identify its mode balance and audience
  • Compare Yousafzai's lecture to her UN speech from fall (M-6-F-WR-01-B) — has her ethos shifted with her authority? How?
English Learners
  • Bilingual ethos/pathos/logos card (Spanish/Mandarin/Vietnamese/Arabic glossary)
  • Audio version of mentor-text excerpts
  • Reduced-target: 1 mode identified per paragraph instead of all 3
Ieps 504s
  • MG-6 fall anchor maintained at desk
  • Reduce annotation to 1 paragraph instead of 2
  • Extended time on exit ticket

Teacher notes

Students arrive remembering ethos/pathos/logos as a label but uncertain how to apply it analytically. The Cold Call moves are essential — every student must voice an answer this lesson. Watch for students who default to 'pathos is best' or 'logos is best' — push them to see that AUDIENCE drives mode-balance. The two mentor speakers (Yousafzai, Sotomayor) carry forward from G6-fall to maintain continuity; this term we add the rhetorical-device toolkit on top of the fall ethos/pathos/logos foundation. Save the warm-up quick-writes — they're useful baseline for what students remember from fall.