Grade 5 Spring — Literary Essay, Voice and Tone as Craft, Poetry Stretch, and Public Speaking
English · WR
G5
eng.g5.s.wr.revision_named_moves_spring
Apply 12 named revision moves (extends fall's 10 with voice-check and tone-check)
Apply the 12 named revision moves for the spring literary essay (extends G5-fall's 10 with two new moves): MOVE 11 VOICE-CHECK (read draft aloud; identify 5 voice-fingerprint elements; revise toward deliberate voice) and MOVE 12 TONE-CHECK (name your tone from MG-7; check that word choice and pace match). The other 10 moves carry forward from fall.
Mastery threshold
85%
Min instances
8
Typical minutes
50
Spaced intervals (days)
1, 3, 7, 14, 30, 60
Prereqs
Successors
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eng.g6.s.wr.revision_named_moves_argument
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Common misconceptions
- Skips MOVE 11 voice-check because the draft 'sounds fine' — voice is invisible to the writer without explicit reading aloud.
- Names a tone but doesn't actually adjust word choice or pace to match it.