Apply 12 named revision moves (extends fall's 10 with voice-check and tone-check)
Exercise Difficulty 5 ~20 min eng.g5.s.ex_27

Revision 8 Moves Apply

Prompt

Apply at least 8 of the 12 named revision moves to YOUR full draft. Annotate each with green-pencil margin note. MUST INCLUDE MOVES 11 (voice-check) and 12 (tone-check).

M-5-S-EX-27 Illustration
Reference image of child's draft with green-pencil annotations for 8 moves visible. Print-ready 8.5x11.

Reference image of child's draft with green-pencil annotations for 8 moves visible. Print-ready 8.5x11.

How it's presented
mode revision on handwriting
Answer criteria
type rubric
criteria
  1. 8+ moves applied
  2. Each annotated with move number
  3. Moves 11 and 12 confirmed
Hints
  1. Read aloud for voice-check.
  2. Name your tone from MG-7 bank.
Misconceptions to watch
  • Applies same move 8 times
  • Skips moves 11/12
Used in lessons