Grade 4 Fall — Persuasive/Argument Writing, Compound-Complex Sentences, Relative Clauses, and Modal Auxiliaries
English · WR
G4
eng.g4.f.wr.revision_named_moves_fall
Apply named revision moves to a persuasive draft (G4 fall expansion)
Execute 9 named revision moves on a persuasive draft, with each move labeled with a green-pencil margin annotation: (1) STRONGER WORD CHOICE (Tier-2 Set 9 substitution); (2) ADD ELABORATION (after every evidence, add a sentence explaining WHY/HOW); (3) COMBINE (produce one compound-complex sentence); (4) CHECK MODAL PRECISION; (5) ADD A RELATIVE CLAUSE; (6) CHECK PROGRESSIVE-TENSE CONSISTENCY; (7) CHECK CONFUSED-WORDS; (8) CHECK TITLE CAPITALIZATION; (9) ADD LINK-BACK AT PARAGRAPH OPENING.
Mastery threshold
85%
Min instances
10
Typical minutes
45
Spaced intervals (days)
1, 3, 7, 14, 30, 60
Common misconceptions
- Treats revision as 'recopying neatly' instead of intentional named moves.
- Applies one move (e.g., stronger word choice) repeatedly and skips the other 8 moves.