Grade 1 Spring — Compound Sentences, Descriptive Writing, Verb Tense, Pronouns, and Workshop Revision
English · WR G1 eng.g1.s.wr.revision_strategies_named

Apply four named revision strategies: reread, add, replace, combine

Learn revision as a distinct phase from editing. Four moves: REREAD aloud; ADD one detail; REPLACE one weak word with a stronger one; COMBINE two short sentences into one longer one.

Mastery threshold
85%
Min instances
10
Typical minutes
45
Spaced intervals (days)
1, 3, 7, 14, 30, 60
Prereqs
Successors
  • eng.g2.f.wr.revision_with_partner_protocol
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Common misconceptions
  • Treats revision as 'erase and start over' rather than 'add to and improve'.
  • Edits surface mechanics (capital letters) when asked to revise content.

Exercise pool (3)

Diff Stem Type
3 Open one of your Fall pieces. Pick ONE revision move (REREAD/ADD/REPLACE/COMBINE) and apply it in GREEN pencil. revision apply one move
4 Pick a DIFFERENT revision move than your last. Apply it in green. Then write one sentence saying which move and why. revision explain
5 Write one sentence explaining which revision move you used today, why you chose it, and how it made your piece better. revision reflection