Apply four named revision strategies: reread, add, replace, combine
Exercise Difficulty 4 ~5 min eng.g1.s.ex_23

Revision Explain

Prompt

Pick a DIFFERENT revision move than your last. Apply it in green. Then write one sentence saying which move and why.

How it's presented
mode handwriting
Answer criteria
type rubric
criteria
  1. Different move from previous
  2. Change visible in green
  3. Reflective sentence names move + reason
Hints
  1. Make a list: REREAD, ADD, REPLACE, COMBINE. Cross off the one you used last time.
  2. Combining is great for choppy two-sentence stretches.
Misconceptions to watch
  • Repeats the same move
  • No reflective sentence