Apply four named revision strategies: reread, add, replace, combine
Exercise Difficulty 3 ~4 min eng.g1.s.ex_22

Revision Apply One Move

Prompt

Open one of your Fall pieces. Pick ONE revision move (REREAD/ADD/REPLACE/COMBINE) and apply it in GREEN pencil.

M-1-S-EX-22 Illustration
Before-and-after sample. Left: original draft 'I went to the park. It was fun.' Right: same draft with green-pen additio

Before-and-after sample. Left: original draft 'I went to the park. It was fun.' Right: same draft with green-pen additions: 'on Sunday' added; 'fun' replaced with 'great' and an arrow drawn; second sentence combined with first via 'because I rode my bike'. Visible green pen marks throughout.

How it's presented
mode handwriting paper three line
color
green
Answer criteria
type rubric
criteria
Move namedChange visible in greenOriginal text not erased
Hints
  1. REREAD first to find a place to improve.
  2. ADD is easiest — find one place to put in one more detail.
Misconceptions to watch
  • Erases instead of revising in green
  • Edits mechanics (period/capital) instead of revising content
Used in lessons