eng.g5.f.lesson_09.mpo_outline_intro_drafting
MPO Outline and Drafting the Introduction
- Students convert MG-8 planner into MG-9 4-level multi-paragraph outline (MPO).
- Students draft the essay introduction (hook + topic-orienting context + thesis-with-three-reasons).
Lesson plan
Warm-up
5 minTeacher reads aloud 3 different essay openings (different hook types). Children identify hook type for each.
- Read three openings
- Ask 'what kind of hook?'
- Affirm specific hook-type labels
Direct instruction
18 minToday you do two things: convert your MG-8 planner into a multi-paragraph outline (MPO) on MG-9, AND draft your INTRODUCTION. MPO is a 4-level hierarchical outline: LEVEL 1 (I., II., III., IV., V.) = the 5 sections (intro / 3 body / conclusion). LEVEL 2 (A., B., C.) = TEEL bands within each body. LEVEL 3 (1., 2., 3.) = sentences in each band. LEVEL 4 (a., b., c.) = specifics (evidence text + citation). Watch teacher convert verse-form-memoir planner to MPO. I. Introduction. A. Hook — surprising-fact: 'Did you know that an entire 320-page book of poetry can hold one childhood?' B. Topic-orienting context: 'Jacqueline Woodson's Brown Girl Dreaming is a 320-page verse memoir of her 1960s and 70s childhood.' C. Thesis-with-three-reasons. II. Body 1 — pace. A. Topic-sentence. B. Evidence (Woodson 2014, 24). C. Explanation. D. Link. (and so on for III, IV, V). Now meet the INTRODUCTION components: HOOK + TOPIC-ORIENTING CONTEXT + THESIS-WITH-THREE-REASONS. The hook is sentence 1 — surprise the reader, ask a question, paint a vivid image, or open with a brief story. The topic-orienting context is sentences 2-3 — orient the reader to the topic. The thesis-with-three-reasons is sentence 4 — declare position and three reasons. Watch teacher draft the verse-form intro. 'Have you ever wondered how a poet can hold a whole childhood in 320 short pages? Jacqueline Woodson's Brown Girl Dreaming does exactly that — a verse memoir spanning ten years of her 1960s and 70s childhood. I argue that verse form works for memoir because verse line breaks slow the pace, because white space lets memory pause, and because line rhythm matches the breath of recollection.'
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The MPO is the SCRIPT. The intro is one paragraph. Hook + context + thesis. Each plays a specific role.model See narrative — 4-level outline + 4-sentence intro paragraph.prompt Teacher converts planner to MPO and drafts intro.
- What are the 4 levels of the MPO?
- Name the 3 parts of an introduction paragraph.
M-5-F-WR-09-A
Chart
Reproduction of MG-9 at 11x17: 4-level hierarchical outline (I. / A. / 1. / a.) with full worked example on verse-form-for-memoir filling all five sections. Dyslexic-friendly font. Print-ready.
MG-9
Chart
Multi-paragraph outline template (MPO, 4 levels): hierarchical structure. LEVEL 1 (I., II., III.) = section headings (intro / 3 body / conclusion). LEVEL 2 (A., B., C.) = TEEL bands within each body. LEVEL 3 (1., 2., 3.) = sentences in each band. LEVEL 4 (a., b., c.) = specifics (evidence text + citation). Worked example for a thesis 'verse form works for memoir' shown with full hierarchical detail across all 5 paragraphs. Print-ready 11x17, dyslexic-friendly font.
Guided practice
22 min-
Convert your MG-8 planner into MG-9 MPO. Aim for at least Levels 1, 2, 3 filled.scaffold MG-9 template at 1.5x; MG-8 planner in hand; indent-strip ruler
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Draft your introduction: hook (1 sentence) + topic-orienting context (1-2 sentences) + thesis-with-three-reasons (1 sentence). Total 4-5 sentences.scaffold Hook-type card deck; introduction anchor chart; thesis from lesson 2 in hand
M-5-F-WR-09-B
Chart
11x17 chart: introduction anatomy showing HOOK / TOPIC-ORIENTING CONTEXT / THESIS-WITH-THREE-REASONS in stacked color bands (blue/yellow/red). Below: 4 hook-type examples (surprising-fact, question, vivid-image, brief-story). Print-ready.
Formative assessment
4 min- Show MPO with Levels 1-3 filled.
- Show drafted introduction. Partner names the hook type and points to the thesis.
- Move status-tile to DRAFT.
Closure
2 min- Star your hook.
- Predict: tomorrow we revisit citation with parenthetical format.
Homework
10 min- At home tonight, read your introduction aloud. Does the hook land? Bring observations tomorrow.
Exercises in this lesson
Differentiation
- Pre-built MPO skeleton with section names; child fills body content
- Hook prompt card (3 sample hooks for child's topic)
- Reduced target: MPO Level 1+2 only; Level 3-4 deferred
- Try TWO different hooks for the same intro and compare which fits the audience better.
- Find the introduction in Joseph Bruchac's Code Talker and identify hook + context + thesis (or thesis-equivalent).
- Bilingual hook cards
- Intro in home language first then English
- Cognate notes (introduction/introducción, hook/gancho)
- Pre-built MPO outline with all levels filled by teacher; child writes intro paragraph only
- Adult scribe
- Reduced target: hook + thesis (skip middle context if needed)
Teacher notes
MPO is the bridge from planner to draft. Children who skip MPO often drift mid-essay because they lose the throughline. The introduction is the second-most-important paragraph of the term (after the thesis from lesson 2). Push for SPECIFIC hooks — vague hooks ('Have you ever thought about school?') don't grab. Carry forward to lesson 12 (citation work) and lesson 15 (conclusion). Bruchac's Code Talker models a thesis-leaning introduction in historical-fiction mode.