Recognize and correct inappropriate shifts in verb voice and mood (CCSS L.8.1.d)
Exercise Difficulty 4 ~8 min eng.g8.f.ex_21

Shift Audit

Prompt

Audit this 4-sentence paragraph for voice and mood shifts. Circle every main-clause verb. Label voice + mood. Identify any unjustified shifts and revise. 'Adichie argues that single stories harm us. Multiple stories are needed. We should consider her examples carefully. The conclusion supports her thesis.'

M-8-F-EX-21-A Interactive Physical / non-image

Shift-audit worksheet with 4-sentence paragraph + verb-circling space + 4 label slots + revision space. Print-ready 8.5x11.

Answer criteria
type rubric
rubric
4 verbs labeled + ≥2 shifts identified + revisions provided = mastery; partial = practicing; no shifts identified = reteach
Hints
  1. Sentence 1: active/indicative. Sentence 2: passive/indicative.
  2. Sentence 3: active/imperative. Sentence 4: active/indicative.
Misconceptions to watch
  • Misses the active-to-passive shift in sentence 2.
  • Doesn't identify the imperative in sentence 3 as a mood shift.