Compare Paraphrase Versions

Look at these 3 versions of a paraphrase from the original source: 'Sugar was the first global commodity, linking continents in chains of consumption and coercion' (Aronson and Budhos 23). Version A: 'Sugar was the first international commodity, connecting continents through chains of consumption and force.' Version B: 'By connecting continents through cycles of demand and forced labor, sugar became the world's first global commodity.' Version C: 'By connecting continents through cycles of demand and forced labor, sugar became the world's first global commodity (Aronson and Budhos 23).' Which version satisfies all 3 rules? Why are the others non-compliant?

1. Version A: words changed but syntax same.
2. Version B: words and syntax changed but no citation.

• Treats Version A as acceptable because words are changed.
• Treats Version B as acceptable because 'it's in my own words.'

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