Apply 10 named revision moves to a G5 essay draft (MG-22)
Exercise
Difficulty 4
~20 min
eng.g5.f.ex_39
Act On Peer Suggestions
Prompt
Act on 5 suggestions from your peer-edit cycles 1 and 2. Annotate each in green-pencil margin: 'CYCLE 1 / MOVE X' or 'CYCLE 2 / MOVE Y'.
M-5-F-EX-39
Illustration
Reference image of a draft with 5 acted-on moves annotated. Print-ready 8.5x11.
How it's presented
mode
revision on handwriting
Answer criteria
type
rubric
criteria
- 5 acted-on moves visible
- Each annotated with cycle and move number
- Each revision specific (not vague)
- Quality measurably improved
Hints
- Use the peer's note specifically.
- Re-read the move in MG-22 before acting.
Misconceptions to watch
- Vague revisions.
- Accepts every suggestion without thinking.
Used in lessons