Identify primary audience and adjust word choice and structure (CCSS W.5.4)
Exercise
Difficulty 4
~7 min
eng.g5.f.ex_32
Audience Check Revision
Prompt
Take 2 sentences from your draft that match your audience card. Take 2 that DON'T match. Revise the mismatched ones.
M-5-F-EX-32
Illustration
Reference image of 2 BEFORE/AFTER sentences with audience-card stapled. Print-ready 8.5x11.
How it's presented
mode
revision on handwriting
Answer criteria
type
rubric
criteria
- 2 matching sentences identified
- 2 mismatched sentences identified
- Mismatched ones revised to match audience
- MG-7 card consulted
Hints
- Match check: does the tone match WHAT-TONE on the card?
- Replace casual words with audience-appropriate words.
Misconceptions to watch
- All sentences seem to match (no audit happening).
- Revisions don't match card.
Used in lessons