Identify primary audience and adjust word choice and structure (CCSS W.5.4)
Exercise Difficulty 4 ~6 min eng.g5.f.ex_14

Same Topic Two Audiences

Prompt

Write a 2-sentence opening for your essay topic for TWO different audiences. Audience 1: peer (5th grade classmate). Audience 2: adult (school principal or community member). Compare the differences in word choice and tone.

M-5-F-EX-14 Illustration
Reference image of two openings side-by-side with annotations on differences. Print-ready 8.5x11.

Reference image of two openings side-by-side with annotations on differences. Print-ready 8.5x11.

How it's presented
mode handwriting paper single line g5
Answer criteria
type rubric
criteria
  1. 2 different openings (same topic)
  2. Word choice differs visibly
  3. Tone differs visibly
  4. Comparison sentence names a specific difference
Hints
  1. Same content, different word choice.
  2. Tone difference shows in vocabulary AND sentence length.
Misconceptions to watch
  • Two openings sound identical.
  • Comparison is vague.