Apply named multi-move revision routines to longer pieces
Exercise Difficulty 3 ~10 min eng.g2.f.ex_32

Revision Apply

Prompt

Apply at least 3 named revision moves to your paragraph 1 draft. Annotate each move in the margin with the move name (REREAD / ADD / REPLACE / COMBINE / CHECK TENSE / CHECK CLOSING).

M-2-F-EX-32 Diagram
Reproduction of M-2-F-WR-17-B: before/after revision side-by-side, with green pencil tracks and margin annotations namin

Reproduction of M-2-F-WR-17-B: before/after revision side-by-side, with green pencil tracks and margin annotations naming the moves. Print-ready, reference for child as they revise their own piece.

How it's presented
mode handwriting with annotation paper two line
Answer criteria
type rubric
criteria
  1. 3+ named moves visible
  2. Each move annotated in margin with name
  3. Original draft still readable (cross-out, not erase)
  4. Green pencil used
Hints
  1. The peer-conference idea you wrote down — that's likely an ADD or REPLACE.
  2. Re-read aloud is REREAD; combining two short sentences is COMBINE.
Misconceptions to watch
  • Erases instead of crossing out.
  • Annotates with abstract terms instead of move names.
Used in lessons