Grade 6 Spring — Rhetorical Devices, Sentence Craft, and Formal Multi-Pass Peer Revision Protocols
Lesson 19 60 min eng.g6.s.lesson_19.rhetorical_performance_script_preparation

Rhetorical-performance script preparation — device markings, audience-register, rehearsal

Objectives
  • Students mark their argument script with rhetorical-device color-coding (per MG-19).
  • Students rehearse 90-second performance with audience-register attention.
  • Students prepare for Q&A on device choices using MG-35 Q&A preparation anchor.
Vocabulary
performancedeliveryregisterpacepauseemphasisaudience

Lesson plan

Warm-up

5 min

Watch MG-22 (4-minute model). Notice: how does the student perform anaphora differently from a flat sentence?

Teacher moves
  • Pause MG-22 at anaphora moment to highlight rising voice
  • Pause at rhetorical question to highlight pause
  • Affirm: devices on page + voice in delivery = rhetorical performance
Media
M-6-S-SPK-19-A Video Physical / non-image

MG-22 video as specified. Grade-6 rhetorician delivers 90-second excerpt with devices marked. Multicultural classroom; audience visible. Caption track on; voiceover teacher narration explaining each device move.

MG-22 Video Physical / non-image

4:00 model of a Grade-6 rhetorical performance. Child stands at podium, holds a printed script with devices color-coded per MG-19. Delivers a 90-second excerpt of their original argument. Anaphora moments (yellow highlights) delivered with rising voice. Rhetorical questions (purple) followed by deliberate 1-beat pauses. Parallelism (blue underline) emphasized with parallel hand gesture. Tricolon delivered as climax. Voiceover/teacher narration off-screen names what the student is doing: 'Notice the pause after the rhetorical question — she lets the audience feel they've answered it themselves.' Multicultural classroom. Audience visible reacting (nodding, leaning in).

Direct instruction

12 min

Today you prepare your RHETORICAL PERFORMANCE for the Rhetorician's Forum tomorrow. Look at MG-19. Mark your script with device colors: anaphora = YELLOW highlight (rising voice for each repetition); rhetorical question = PURPLE highlight + [PAUSE] marker after (1-beat pause for audience to feel the answer); parallelism = BLUE underline (matched stress); antithesis = GREEN highlight (emphasized contrast); asyndeton = ORANGE marks between items (compressed delivery). Stress = BOLD. Pause = / mark. Once marked, REHEARSE with elbow partner using rehearsal mirror. 90-second performance. Audience-register from MG-28 (peer/cross-grade/community + formal/informal). Choose YOUR audience and adjust voice/pace/eye-contact accordingly. Q&A preparation from MG-35 — anticipate 'why did you use ___?' for each device.

Key examples
  • The script DIRECTS the delivery. Markings are stage directions.
    model Look at MG-19 worked example. Anaphora in yellow with rising-voice markers. Rhetorical question in purple with [PAUSE — 1 beat] after. Parallelism in blue underline with stress markers. Tricolon at the end with deliberate slow pace.
    prompt Sample marked script for a 90-second argument.
  • Audience determines the dials. Same script can perform differently for different audiences.
    model If audience = peer + formal (classmates at school assembly): voice = warm, pace = brisk, eye-contact = rotating among friends and teacher, hand-gestures = sparing. If audience = community + formal (school board meeting): voice = measured, pace = slower, eye-contact = direct to officials, hand-gestures = purposeful.
    prompt Audience-register example.
  • Q&A = explaining your rhetorical CHOICES. Be ready for 3 likely questions per device.
    model MG-35 sample: 'Why did you use anaphora in paragraph 3?' → prepared answer: 'I wanted the audience to feel the building urgency. Three repetitions establish the pattern; the fourth iteration breaks for climax.'
    prompt Q&A preparation: anticipate likely questions.
Checks for understanding
  • Cold Call: name a device + its delivery mark from MG-19
  • Pair-share: identify your audience + register for tomorrow's performance
  • Thumbs: my script is marked (up) / I need 5 more minutes (down)
Media
M-6-S-SPK-19-C Chart
MG-28 audience-register 2x3 matrix poster as specified. Worked examples for peer/cross-grade/community + formal/informal

MG-28 audience-register 2x3 matrix poster as specified. Worked examples for peer/cross-grade/community + formal/informal.

MG-28 Chart
Audience-register matrix for rhetorical performance (SL.6.6): 2x3 grid. ROWS: peer / cross-grade / adult-community. COLS

Audience-register matrix for rhetorical performance (SL.6.6): 2x3 grid. ROWS: peer / cross-grade / adult-community. COLS: formal / informal. Each cell with examples of register choices — vocabulary (Tier-1 vs. Tier-2 vs. Tier-3), idiom appropriateness, pace, eye-contact protocol, hand-gesture norms. Worked example: PEER + FORMAL (school assembly with peers) = Tier-2 vocabulary preferred, idioms cautiously, eye-contact rotating, hand-gestures sparingly. ADULT-COMMUNITY + FORMAL (community council) = Tier-2 plus domain-specific Tier-3 where appropriate, idioms only if culturally shared, eye-contact direct, hand-gestures purposeful. Bottom rule: 'Register is audience-attuned voice. Your devices are tools; register is the dial.' Print-ready 11x17.

Guided practice

30 min
Tasks
  • Mark your script using MG-19 color-coding key. Anaphora yellow, rhetorical questions purple + [PAUSE], parallelism blue underline, antithesis green, asyndeton orange, stress bold, pause /.
    scaffold MG-19 template + 5-color highlighter kit
  • Rehearse 90-second performance with elbow partner. Use rehearsal mirror. Time yourself. Repeat 3 times. Adjust audience-register per MG-28.
    scaffold Rehearsal mirror + 90-second timer; MG-28 register matrix
  • Prepare 3 likely Q&A responses using MG-35 anchor.
    scaffold MG-35 Q&A preparation card; pre-filled question stems
Media
M-6-S-SPK-19-B Interactive Physical / non-image

MG-19 template as specified. Used by each student to mark their own script. 5-color highlighter key. Pre-filled stage-direction notes (e.g., [PAUSE — 1 beat after rhetorical question]).

MG-19 Chart
Rhetorical-performance script template: a presentation-script page with device-highlighting key. KEY (bottom): anaphora

Rhetorical-performance script template: a presentation-script page with device-highlighting key. KEY (bottom): anaphora = YELLOW highlight; rhetorical question = PURPLE highlight + [PAUSE] marker; parallelism = BLUE underline; antithesis = GREEN highlight; asyndeton = ORANGE marks between items; stress = BOLD; pause = / mark. Worked sample: 'We will not stand by. We will not turn away. We will not be silent. [PAUSE — anaphora climax.] These children, these schools, these futures: they belong to all of us. [Tricolon — asyndeton.] Are we not their advocates? [Rhetorical question — PAUSE for 1 beat.]' Print-ready 8.5x11.

Formative assessment

4 min
Exit ticket
  • Submit your marked script AND your 3 Q&A prepared responses.
scoring Script marked with 3+ devices + 3 Q&A responses = mastery; 2 of 2 partial = practicing; missing = reteach overnight

Closure

1 min
Moves
  • Restate: script + voice = rhetorical performance; markings direct delivery
  • Preview tomorrow's Rhetorician's Forum

Homework

25 min
Tasks
  • Final rehearsal: at home, perform full 90 seconds 3 times. Time yourself. Adjust pace if over/under. Bring marked script + Q&A prep tomorrow.

Exercises in this lesson

eng.g6.s.ex_30
Mark your performance script with MG-19 device color-coding: anaphora yellow, rhetorical question purple + [PAUSE], parallelism blue...
mark script for performance · diff 3
eng.g6.s.ex_31
Prepare 3 likely Q&A responses for the Rhetorician's Forum using MG-35 anchor. Each response explains a rhetorical CHOICE you made.
prepare q and a responses · diff 3

Differentiation

Scaffolds
  • MG-19 template at every desk
  • Pre-marked sample script for reference
  • Audio recording option instead of live performance
Extensions
  • Add slide/visual-aid component (SL.6.5)
  • Prepare for hostile Q&A using concede-pivot-refute from fall
English Learners
  • Bilingual MG-19 + MG-28
  • Audio of MG-22 model performance
  • Reduced-target: 60-second performance instead of 90
Ieps 504s
  • Allow audio-record presentation instead of live
  • Reduced-target: 60-second performance
  • Pre-marked script with 2 devices instead of 3

Teacher notes

Lesson 19 is the performance preparation day. The script marking is the bridge from page to stage. Watch MG-22 carefully with students — the device-delivery moves are felt rather than analyzed. The rehearsal mirror is essential — students need to see themselves deliver. Time the rehearsal precisely — 90 seconds is the target; over/under affects audience attention. Sensitive Q&A preparation matters for students who may face challenging questions (the concede-pivot-refute from fall is the strategy).