Revise a capstone composition in 4 passes with formal teacher conferences (CCSS W.8.5)
Exercise
Difficulty 3
~12 min
eng.g8.s.ex_27
Pass One Structure Audit
Prompt
Complete Pass-1 STRUCTURE audit. Score each of 8 Pass-1 criteria 1-4. Note weakest 2 with revision plan.
Answer criteria
type
rubric
rubric
8 criteria scored + 2 weakest identified + revision plan per weakest = mastery
Hints
- Most common Pass-1 failures: audience drift; missing counter-argument; weak conclusion so-what.
- Be honest — overestimating doesn't help your draft.
Misconceptions to watch
- Self-scores all 4s without honest critique.
- Skips revision plan.
Used in lessons