Write a multi-source research paper (5-7 paragraphs, 4+ sources, MLA citation) (CCSS W.7.2.a-f; W.7.7; W.7.8)
Exercise Difficulty 4 ~22 min eng.g7.f.ex_31

Pass Two Peer Review

Prompt

Apply Pass 2 SENTENCE-LEVEL criteria (10 criteria) to your partner's draft. Use blue highlights. Document at least 5 sentence-level feedback points (sentence-type variety, modifier errors, wordiness, signal-phrase variety).

M-7-F-WR-EX-31-A Interactive Physical / non-image

Pass 2 checkoff sheet with 10 criteria and feedback-margin lines. Print-ready 8.5x11.

Answer criteria
type rubric
rubric
10 criteria checked + 5+ specific feedback points = 4; 10 checked + 3-4 feedback = 3; 10 checked but vague = 2; <10 checked = 1
Hints
  1. Count sentence types in each paragraph; flag uniformity.
  2. Audit signal phrases — does 'X says' appear too often?
Misconceptions to watch
  • Pass 2 feedback drifts into content claims.
  • Doesn't count sentence types.
Used in lessons