Conduct FORMAL THREE-PASS peer revision — CONTENT, SENTENCE, MECHANICS (CCSS W.6.5)
Exercise Difficulty 4 ~90 min eng.g6.s.ex_36

Complete Three Passes

Prompt

Conduct all 3 passes (CONTENT, SENTENCE, MECHANICS) on a partner's argument over 3 sessions. Submit all 3 check-off sheets + top-revision summaries.

M-6-S-WR-EX-36-A Interactive Physical / non-image

3 check-off sheets (MG-16 Passes 1, 2, 3 already specified). Plus revision-summary card for each pass.

Answer criteria
type rubric
rubric
3 passes + 3 check-off sheets + 3 top-revision summaries + SBAR discipline = 4; 3 passes some discipline drift = 3; 2 passes complete = 2; <2 = 1
Hints
  1. One pass at a time. Doing all three at once is worse than each well.
  2. SBAR for every comment: Specific / Based-on-evidence / Actionable / Respectful.
Misconceptions to watch
  • Conflates passes (mechanics comments in Pass 1).
  • Vague comments without SBAR.