Pass One Self Audit

3-pass peer-revision protocol anchor: 3-band stacked card. PASS 1 — CONTENT (purple, 14 criteria — extends fall MG-21): claim arguable / evidence credible / warrant explained / audience considered / counterclaim addressed / structure follows MPO / introduction hooks / conclusion synthesizes. PASS 2 — SENTENCE-LEVEL (blue, 10 criteria — NEW at G6-spring): parallelism applied / anaphora applied / 1 more device applied / active voice default / passive used only deliberately / sentence rhythm varied (short-long mix) / tricolon present somewhere / sentence openings varied / no unnecessary 'there is/are' / no 'be-verb' overuse. PASS 3 — MECHANICS (green, 12 criteria — NEW at G6-spring): pronoun case correct / intensive pronouns correct / pronoun consistency / vague-pronoun antecedents clear / semicolon used correctly (at least once) / colon used correctly (at least once) / commas for nonrestrictive / commas in compound sentences / spelling clean / capitalization clean / quotation punctuation / italics for titles. Bottom rule: 'ONE PASS AT A TIME. Doing all three at once is worse than doing each well.' Print-ready 11x17.

MG-16 Pass 1 14-criterion check-off sheet (already specified).