Plan, draft, revise, peer-edit, rehearse, and present a 4-6 paragraph literary essay with embedded quotation
Exercise Difficulty 4 ~12 min eng.g5.s.ex_31

Apply 3 Suggestions

Prompt

Apply YOUR 3 chosen peer suggestions to YOUR draft. Annotate each with 'Applied suggestion 1: ___' note in green pencil.

M-5-S-EX-31 Illustration
Reference image of child's draft with 3 suggestion-applied annotations in green pencil. Print-ready 8.5x11.

Reference image of child's draft with 3 suggestion-applied annotations in green pencil. Print-ready 8.5x11.

How it's presented
mode revision on handwriting
Answer criteria
type rubric
criteria
3 suggestions appliedEach annotatedRevision improves draft
Hints
  1. Apply one at a time so you can see effect.
  2. Mark exactly what changed.
Misconceptions to watch
  • Applies superficially
  • No annotation