Identify voice fingerprint elements and craft deliberate voice and tone (CCSS W.5.4)
Exercise
Difficulty 4
~8 min
eng.g5.s.ex_28
Voice Check Revision Aloud
Prompt
Read YOUR draft aloud (whisper or sub-vocalize). Identify 1 sentence where voice feels off. Apply MOVE 11 (voice-check). Mark revision.
How it's presented
mode
revision on handwriting
Answer criteria
type
rubric
criteria
- 1 sentence identified
- Voice issue named (which fingerprint element)
- Revision applied
Hints
- Listen for the element that doesn't match your overall voice.
- Most common: monotone openings.
Misconceptions to watch
- No revision (just identifies)
- Vague issue ('sounds bad')
Used in lessons