Identify primary audience and adjust word choice and structure (CCSS W.5.4)
Exercise Difficulty 5 ~8 min eng.g5.f.ex_50

Audience Aware Revision Full Essay

Prompt

Take your full draft and audit ONE paragraph for audience match. Identify 3 word-choice changes that would better match your audience card. Apply.

How it's presented
mode revision on handwriting
Answer criteria
type rubric
criteria
  1. 1 paragraph audited
  2. 3 word-choice changes identified
  3. Each change matches audience card
  4. Each change annotated
Hints
  1. Re-read with the audience card in hand.
  2. Vague generic words often miss audience.
Misconceptions to watch
  • No specific changes identified.
  • Changes don't match card.