Use synonyms and antonyms for precise word choice (L.4.5.c, L.4.3.a)
Exercise Difficulty 4 ~8 min eng.g4.s.ex_49

Precise Word Revision Full Essay

Prompt

Take your full draft. Find 5 vague words. Replace each with a precise synonym using the gradient strip. Annotate change in green.

How it's presented
mode revision on handwriting
Answer criteria
type rubric
criteria
  1. 5 vague words identified
  2. 5 precise replacements
  3. Each annotated in margin
  4. Replacements fit register and meaning
Hints
  1. Vague words: big, small, good, bad, hard, easy.
  2. Pick precise synonym from gradient strip.
Misconceptions to watch
  • Replaces with impressive word instead of precise.
  • Annotation skipped.