Plan, draft, elaborate, revise, peer-edit, and publish a 5-paragraph persuasive/argument essay
Exercise
Difficulty 3
~7 min
eng.g4.f.ex_10
Tone Revision
Prompt
Take your intro. Rewrite it for a DIFFERENT audience (formal → casual, or casual → formal). Change tone but keep the claim.
How it's presented
mode
handwriting
paper
single line g4
Answer criteria
type
rubric
criteria
- Same claim across both
- Different audience identified
- Tone words changed visibly
- At least 2 specific word-level changes
Hints
- Formal: cited evidence, longer sentences. Casual: observation, shorter sentences.
- Tone is in WORD CHOICE.
Misconceptions to watch
- Changes claim instead of tone.
- Tone change is too small.
Used in lessons