Apply the Grade-3 spring revision menu (7 named moves)
Exercise
Difficulty 4
~5 min
eng.g3.s.ex_30
Expand Detail Revision
Prompt
Find one paragraph in your draft where the EXAMPLE is thin (just one short sentence). Expand it by adding a specific number, name, date, or sensory observation. Margin-annotate 'EXPAND DETAIL'.
How it's presented
mode
revision on handwriting
Answer criteria
type
rubric
criteria
- Thin example identified
- Specific element added (number / name / date / sense)
- Margin annotation applied
- Example becomes concrete
Hints
- Specific = a number, a name, a date, a sense.
- Don't just add more vague language — anchor it.
Misconceptions to watch
- Expands with more vague language.
- Adds an unrelated detail.
Used in lessons