Run a peer-editing conversation using the 5-move protocol
Exercise
Difficulty 3
~7 min
eng.g2.s.ex_30
Peer Edit Role Play
Prompt
With a partner: trade drafts and run the 5 peer-edit moves. Audio-record if possible. After: write ONE compliment-with-quote you gave AND ONE suggestion you gave (by move name).
M-2-S-EX-30
Video
Physical / non-image
Reference video clip M-2-S-WR-14-A excerpt at 0:20-0:55 showing the compliment-with-quote and suggestion moves only, for re-watching during practice.
How it's presented
mode
structured form
Answer criteria
type
rubric
criteria
- Compliment quotes a real sentence from partner's draft
- Suggestion names a real revision move (ADD DETAIL / STRONGER VERB / COMBINE / VARY LENGTH / CHECK TENSE)
Hints
- Compliment must QUOTE — not just 'good job.'
- Suggestion names a move from the menu.
Misconceptions to watch
- Generic compliment.
- Suggestion doesn't name a move.
Used in lessons