Revise a capstone composition in 4 passes with formal teacher conferences (CCSS W.8.5)
Exercise
Difficulty 4
~15 min
eng.g8.s.ex_30
Pass Three Sentence Audit
Prompt
Complete Pass-3 SENTENCE audit. Score 10 Pass-3 criteria. Identify register drift, missing voice/mood deliberateness, missing cohesion/coherence. Revise 1 paragraph.
Answer criteria
type
rubric
rubric
10 criteria scored + 1 paragraph revised + visible improvements = mastery
Hints
- Read paragraph aloud to hear register drift.
- Mark contractions, vague modifiers, conversational asides.
Misconceptions to watch
- Treats Pass-3 as Pass-4 (mechanics first).
- Skips voice/mood audit.
Used in lessons