Revise a capstone composition in 4 passes with formal teacher conferences (CCSS W.8.5)
Exercise
Difficulty 3
~12 min
eng.g8.s.ex_28
Pass Two Content Audit
Prompt
Complete Pass-2 CONTENT audit. Score 8 Pass-2 criteria. Identify weakest body paragraph; integrate 1 new research evidence with synthesis move.
Answer criteria
type
rubric
rubric
8 criteria scored + evidence integrated + synthesis move applied = mastery
Hints
- Most common Pass-2 failures: opinion without evidence; sources cited but not integrated; weak so-what.
- Use G8-fall synthesis moves.
Misconceptions to watch
- Adds evidence without integrating (drop-quote without synthesis move).
- Self-scores high without honest critique.
Used in lessons