Write in formal academic style with deliberate register control (CCSS L.8.3; W.8.4)
Exercise
Difficulty 2
~8 min
eng.g8.f.ex_06
Register Revision
Prompt
Revise these 5 conversational-register sentences into formal academic register. Apply at least 3 of the 9 features (third-person default; precise modifiers; no contractions; signposting; etc.).
Answer criteria
type
rubric
rubric
5 revisions + each applies ≥3 features = mastery
Hints
- Replace contractions (don't → do not).
- Replace vague modifiers (a lot of → considerable / substantial).
Misconceptions to watch
- Substitutes long words for clear words (uses 'utilize' for 'use').
- Doesn't apply third-person where appropriate.
Used in lessons