Plan, research, draft, revise, peer-edit, and publish a 5-6 paragraph argument with at least 2 sources and 1 counterclaim (CCSS W.6.1.a-e)
Exercise
Difficulty 4
~12 min
eng.g6.f.ex_37
Write Three Sbar Comments
Prompt
Write 3 SBAR comments on your partner's draft: one on CLAIM/argument, one on COUNTERCLAIM, one on a MECHANICS issue. Each must hit all 4 SBAR elements.
M-6-F-WR-EX-37-A
Interactive
Physical / non-image
SBAR feedback form. 3 rows × 4 SBAR elements each. Sample at top. Print-ready 8.5x11.
Answer criteria
type
rubric
rubric
3 comments × 4 elements each = 4; 3 comments × 3 elements = 3; 2 comments full = 2; vague comments = 1
Hints
- SPECIFIC = paragraph/sentence number; BASED = quote the line; ACTIONABLE = name move; RESPECTFUL = framing.
- Use MG-21 rubric as move-bank.
Misconceptions to watch
- Vague praise ('good job').
- Missing one SBAR element (often respectful).
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