Identify voice fingerprint elements and craft deliberate voice and tone (CCSS W.5.4)
Exercise
Difficulty 4
~10 min
eng.g5.s.ex_17
Voice Fingerprint Own Draft
Prompt
Apply voice-fingerprint to YOUR full draft. Mark 5 elements. Star 2 elements to push at revision. Add 1 personification or hyperbole to a warrant.
M-5-S-EX-17
Illustration
Reference image of voice-fingerprint card applied to child's own draft. Print-ready 8.5x11.
How it's presented
mode
revision on handwriting
Answer criteria
type
rubric
criteria
- 5 voice-fingerprint elements identified
- 2 starred for revision push
- 1 personification/hyperbole added
Hints
- Read aloud first — voice is invisible without sound.
- Star the elements that surprise you most.
Misconceptions to watch
- Generic answers ('my voice is good')
- Personification too subtle
Used in lessons