Vary sentence beginnings using 4 patterns for voice and rhythm (L.5.3.a deepened)
Exercise Difficulty 3 ~7 min eng.g5.s.ex_16

Sentence Beginning Audit

Prompt

Audit 1 paragraph of YOUR draft. Mark each sentence opening pattern (S=subject / P=prepositional / Sub=subordinator / Part=participle). If all S, rewrite 2 sentences with different patterns.

How it's presented
mode revision on handwriting
Answer criteria
type rubric
criteria
  1. Each sentence opening marked
  2. If monotone, 2 rewrites applied
  3. At least 2 of 4 patterns visible after revision
Hints
  1. Look at FIRST WORD of each sentence.
  2. Subordinators: when, although, because, after, since, if, while, before.
Misconceptions to watch
  • Misidentifies participle as subordinator
  • Doesn't see PREP phrases at start