Apply the 7-criterion peer-editing rubric for informational writing
Exercise Difficulty 5 ~9 min eng.g3.s.ex_51

Revision After Peer Edit

Prompt

Based on your partner's rubric feedback, apply at least 3 named revision moves to your draft AND write a 3-sentence reflection naming WHICH moves you applied, WHY you applied them, and WHICH of partner's suggestions you chose NOT to take (and why). Annotate each move in green pencil with the move name (STRONGER WORD / EXPAND DETAIL / COMBINE / SVA / TENSE / TRANSITION / NAME SOURCE).

M-3-S-EX-51 Illustration
Reference image of a draft with 3 named revision moves applied, each with margin annotation in green pencil. Print-ready

Reference image of a draft with 3 named revision moves applied, each with margin annotation in green pencil. Print-ready 8.5x11.

How it's presented
mode revision on handwriting
Answer criteria
type rubric
criteria
  1. 3+ named moves applied
  2. Each move annotated
  3. Revisions actually change the text (not cosmetic)
  4. Writer's decision-making evident
Hints
  1. Pick the 3 most impactful suggestions from your partner's rubric.
  2. You don't have to take every suggestion.
Misconceptions to watch
  • Applies cosmetic changes only.
  • Annotates but doesn't actually change the text.