Apply named revision moves: add detail, stronger verb, vary length, combine, check tense
Exercise Difficulty 5 ~7 min eng.g2.s.ex_33

Apply All Five Moves

Prompt

Apply ALL 5 revision moves to your draft at least once: ADD DETAIL, STRONGER VERB, COMBINE, VARY SENTENCE LENGTH, CHECK TENSE. Annotate each in the margin.

M-2-S-EX-33 Illustration
Reference image of the M-2-S-WR-15-B fully-annotated draft showing all 5 sticky-note annotations.

Reference image of the M-2-S-WR-15-B fully-annotated draft showing all 5 sticky-note annotations.

How it's presented
mode handwriting paper two line
Answer criteria
type rubric
criteria
  1. All 5 moves visible
  2. Each annotation correctly named
  3. Changes are real (not cosmetic)
Hints
  1. Use the bookmark.
  2. Tally as you go: 1-2-3-4-5.
Misconceptions to watch
  • Misnames a move.
  • Hits 3-4 moves and forgets the 5th.
Used in lessons