Publish a revised descriptive paragraph (5-8 sentences) at end of unit
Exercise
Difficulty 5
~20 min
eng.g1.s.ex_40
Publish Descriptive
Prompt
Publish your final 5-8 sentence descriptive paragraph. Check the list: ≥2 compound sentences, ≥3 senses, consistent tense, ≥1 visible revision move.
M-1-S-EX-40
Illustration
Three-page sample published booklet. Page 1: cover with illustrated frame, title 'My Backyard', author 'Maya Lopez, Grade 1'. Page 2: 6-sentence paragraph with sense words bolded, compound sentences highlighted. Page 3: 'About the Author' page with photo placeholder, three lines about the child. Print-ready PDF template included as scaffold.
How it's presented
mode
handwriting
publication
True
Answer criteria
type
rubric
criteria
- 5-8 sentences
- ≥2 compound sentences (with and/but/or/so/because)
- Sensory adjectives from ≥3 senses
- Consistent verb tense throughout
- Visible revision-move evidence (green ink or note)
- Title and author name on cover
Hints
- Read your published copy aloud one final time before turning it in.
- Use the checklist sticker on your cover.
Misconceptions to watch
- Tense-mix not fully corrected at publication
- All compound sentences use AND (variety missing)
- Single sense (sight only)
Used in lessons