Conduct a Grade-1 peer conference using compliment-question-suggestion
Exercise Difficulty 4 ~5 min eng.g1.s.ex_38

Peer Conference Apply

Prompt

Apply at least one suggestion from your peer conference using one of the four revision moves. Mark the change in green.

M-1-S-EX-38 Illustration
Before/after example. Left: a child's draft titled 'My Cat'. Right: same draft with green-pen ADD: 'soft and warm' inser

Before/after example. Left: a child's draft titled 'My Cat'. Right: same draft with green-pen ADD: 'soft and warm' inserted before 'cat'; green-pen COMBINE arrow between two short sentences with 'and' written above. Reference for what 'visible change' looks like.

How it's presented
mode handwriting
color
green
Answer criteria
type rubric
criteria
  1. Visible change in green
  2. Change matches one of four moves
  3. Change improves the draft (not random)
Hints
  1. Pick the suggestion that you AGREE with the most.
  2. ADD is the easiest move — find one place to insert a sense word.
Misconceptions to watch
  • No visible change
  • Change is editing (period) not revising (content)
Used in lessons